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My errors in my presentation were obvious to me before even watching the recording of my pitch. After watching the video it was apart to me that the way I cam across presenting the information was very boring. There is no presence of excitement or energy which would probably make an investor think I am boring and my idea will not have a chance of being successful. My body language in the pitch is very lame. I do not move my hands at all and I look like I feel out of place or nervous.  Moving around and interacting with the audience more will help spice things up. I think if I could have presented my idea a little better with more confidence I could have drawn some more appeal from the audience. I also did not explain very well what I needed the funding for. Investors would most likely want to hear exactly where there funds are going. It would be bad if my audience did not think I had any skin in the pot for my company. I think if I can slow myself down and put a little more energy into my presentation the overall result will be a lot greater than this time around. I might try to perfect my knowledge on the subject more next time, that way I have a more comfortable feel about the subject and this may help my presentation. My idea was original, but there were no awesome features that I had to offer my audience to give my idea a competitive advantage. During my presentation I need to come forward more confident and ready to take control. I want my audience to be listening to me, not sitting there waiting for me to be done.