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My presentation could use some tweaks to make it better. First of all my speach was completly memorized and therefore i did not show much emotion in my idea. A business pitch needs to have emotion to get people to buy into the idea and I failed in that category. I also needed to speak louder in this situation as i did not sound very confident in what i was saying. Lastly, I had a lot of unneeded hand gestures. These gestures are good at times but the majority of mine were out of a nervous habbit that i need to stop. Overall I think i need to be more confident in my speach and have it be more free flowing so that more enthusiasm can be seen.