Reaction

I thought a lot about how I would look on camera after giving the idea pitch. But I realized that I looked composed and comfortable with the actions, body language and showed a good deal of enthusiasm.

My presentation could use some tweaks to make it better. First of all my speach was completly memorized and therefore i did not show much emotion in my idea. A business pitch needs to have emotion to get people to buy into the idea and I failed in that category. I also needed to speak louder in this situation as i did not sound very confident in what i was saying. Lastly, I had a lot of unneeded hand gestures. These gestures are good at times but the majority of mine were out of a nervous habbit that i need to stop.

    I thought that I was to short on my presentation and should have explained a little more of my company.  I thought I was moving a little and kind of making gesture's but I saw that I was not really moving and shaking during the middle and not using my hands enough. 

I thought that after watching the video of my pitch, I could have pointed out my flaws prior to even watching the video. It's simple things like not swaying back and forth which I tend to do. I think that my delivery was pretty good, and that I had good presence. Although I did not get out everything I wanted to, I did get out enough so that the audience understood what our service represents. There really isn't any difference from what I expected out of myself. I think that my pitch was effective due to my stage presence.

My presentation was not that effective than other classmates' because I didn't do all 6 answers that I prepared for.  When I saw my presentations from CD, I thought I didn't do well because my voice was to low and my hands were looking awkward.  The only effective thing that I think is the idea.  Camcorder+projector is my own idea from high school. 

If I had a chance to do presentation again later, I will keep my voice up, so everyone could hear my voice clearly.  Also I will memorize all words that I prepare for.