peer review

1. Does the industry analysis cover all the needed points

I think it covers almost everything. You might want to include a brief descriptions of what media buying is and what it means to be a media buyer.

2. Does the rough draft flow correctly

The flow is fine, the formatting could use a little work. It goes from paragraphs to more of a bulleted format.

3. Are there enough visuals through out the analysis

After reading your marketing analysis I agree that this is a market that few have gotten into in the area, and could be a great idea to follow up on.  I thought your paper was very concise and followed the same similar guidelines throught the paper.  It was also well organized and you didn't seem to repeat your self.  One thing that i think your paper could have used though is some graphs and charts.