-Remove header (The document is for investors to ENGL420
- goes toward total ethos)
2. Where do you suggest we use graphs and graphics for our paper?
-A pie chart of the current market share of competition
-A bar graph of projected sales and/or growth
-Possibly a picture on the title page
3. What else can we elaborate and add additional information on?
-Most bullet points do not contain actual content, start there.
-Remove questions from final draft
-Find more sources and use information from them on local or national competition
-If you are having trouble finding sources visit the management library in Krannert and ask a librarian for help. They can find detailed marketing reports about almost any topic
Submitted by jmaxwell14 on Tue, 03/10/2009 - 14:45.#
I think that your team haas a great start to what needs to be done. With the more information that you post into this document, the better. The formatting does need a lot work, but I know that you probably understand that. Once the changes are made, you will have a great analysis.
1. What additional points can we add?
-Title page
-Table of contents -Bibliography
-Use Paragraph form in later sections
-Label individual section with headers
-Add pro-forma content
-Do not double space and do not indent paragraphs
-Remove header (The document is for investors to ENGL420
- goes toward total ethos)
2. Where do you suggest we use graphs and graphics for our paper?
-A pie chart of the current market share of competition
-A bar graph of projected sales and/or growth
-Possibly a picture on the title page
3. What else can we elaborate and add additional information on?
-Most bullet points do not contain actual content, start there.
-Remove questions from final draft
-Find more sources and use information from them on local or national competition
-If you are having trouble finding sources visit the management library in Krannert and ask a librarian for help. They can find detailed marketing reports about almost any topic
I think that your team haas a great start to what needs to be done. With the more information that you post into this document, the better. The formatting does need a lot work, but I know that you probably understand that. Once the changes are made, you will have a great analysis.