English 421: Technical Writing

On Sunday, we met as a group to divide corrections we knew would be necessary before submission of the final draft.  Andy and Cody were tasked to work on adding more information regarding issues which hamper collaboration to our introduction.  Tianyi was to collect screenshots from each site and add the appropriate citation.  Finally, I was to add callouts for important quotes and to add the screenshots ot the paper.

After Sunday, Tianyi sent me the screenshots and appropriate citations.  I added the screenshots to the paper but was waiting to add the citations until I spoke with Cat about the correct method to cite these visuals.  In addition, Cody found a white paper that contained information pertanent to collaboration issues.

At the current moment, we are waiting for feedback from Cat to proceed.  For the most part, we have correct the errors in our draft that we are aware of and are waiting for her corrections to continue with our revisions.

~Andrew